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These Last Moments

Journal Entry: Fri May 2, 2008, 6:57 AM
It was the last falling.
The moments slowed to a crawl
much slower than the grass could grow.
I felt warmth finally
but only in my eyes and my groin.
A dampness with no stain.
Inside my shell going colder fast.
I would say this prayer she taught me
but I forgot to whom.
The quaint fairy tales I remember,
part of me deep, so deep
they lay partially submerged in green mist.
The rain was such a soft sound as it puddles on my side.
It washes my tears into fertile ground seeds they wait.
Will I disappear?
Will I be remembered for anything?
Does it matter,
I think not for these tiny organisms
reach up into me with tiny sting of longing...
for something I wasted so long ago.

  • Mood: Gloomy
  • Listening to: Echoes of Prayer - HOS #524
  • Reading: Last Rites
  • Watching: Full Moon Sinking
  • Playing: my last trump card
  • Eating: last supper
  • Drinking: gas Ilene

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    ~GoWithTheFlowEnzo:iconGoWithTheFlowEnzo: May 28, 2008, 6:15:19 AM
    thanks!

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    ~uiuiu:iconuiuiu: Apr 16, 2008, 1:07:31 PM
    hi there !
    thank you :)
    *krmenxa:iconkrmenxa: Apr 16, 2008, 5:27:01 AM
    thank you so much.

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    *zampedroni:iconzampedroni: Mar 11, 2008, 9:37:14 AM
    Hey Chip
    thanks so much for visiting my gallery and for the nice comment you have posed,
    I appreciate that,
    Mario

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    *zampedroni:iconzampedroni: Mar 11, 2008, 7:27:11 AM
    Hi Chip
    compliments for yours art works

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    ~mercier:iconmercier: Mar 2, 2008, 4:13:18 AM
    hello : )

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    *ibrahimabutouq:iconibrahimabutouq: Feb 16, 2008, 7:31:59 AM
    really marvellouos , great , i proud of your creativity
    *midnightarcher:iconmidnightarcher: Jan 28, 2008, 8:55:41 PM
    Haha.. well nothing much going on. A lot of horse stuff. Singing.. trying to find new representation. What have you been up to? Oh and my mom got a deviantart page. Her name is holdyourhorses. She is putting up action shots and stuff. ttyl

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    ~Brahmadomtao:iconBrahmadomtao: Jan 3, 2008, 3:34:02 AM
    Burly journal entry, "Inclement Weather"...I've never been through anything like that, but friends of mine have. That can be a lot to recover from.

    I liked some of your pics in your gallery- especially the house one. I could swear that is a house in Washington, USA (The Little Light it Twinkles) I lived in for a few years... if so, the inside is far creepier than the outside even suggests.

    Peace.

    -JP

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    *gregoriousone:icongregoriousone: Dec 9, 2007, 2:09:39 PM
    thank you kindly for the fave

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    *introvertevent:iconintrovertevent: Dec 9, 2007, 6:14:04 AM





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    che calza a pennello...
    ~Justasmallcrime:iconJustasmallcrime: Dec 2, 2007, 1:57:39 AM
    thx for the favs and the comments (:

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    *soheir:iconsoheir: Nov 26, 2007, 7:39:51 AM
    :shakefish:


    thaaank youuu :sing:


    :altermind:

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    ~laflaneuse:iconlaflaneuse: Nov 25, 2007, 3:34:18 AM
    :thanks:

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    :plug:
    ~L0ft-CriM:iconL0ft-CriM: Oct 29, 2007, 12:00:07 PM
    :wave:thank you for the add :thanks:

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    ~malikanas:iconmalikanas: Oct 15, 2007, 8:10:50 AM
    Many thanks for the :+fav: ;)
    I miss your calligraphy so much !
    `nuvem:iconnuvem: Aug 25, 2007, 7:23:16 PM
    hi.
    used your brushes here [link]


    thank you

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    ~follettina:iconfollettina: Jun 13, 2007, 12:44:19 AM
    * beautiful gallery *

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    ~Digifruitella:iconDigifruitella: May 12, 2007, 7:38:10 PM
    hey sweet ! cool comments on my stuff. i appreciate it! =) i've got 2 more in there.

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    ~shellsamacaroni:iconshellsamacaroni: May 12, 2007, 3:32:02 PM
    Thank you for stopping by my page and for the comment!